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Post by Ocean on Jul 13, 2008 8:42:50 GMT -5
In these few posts, I'll explain how to really spice up your posts if you find them boring, or too short.
Some people find their post short because they don't describe whats happening. I like to describe three things; - What the horse is doing - What is happening aroudn the horse (The weather, other horses, ect.) - And what the horse is thinking
Ex. - Storm trotted across the valley to Sand. There, you've only described one thing: What the horse is doing. Now look at this: Ex. - Storm trotted across the lush green Valley over to Sand, where he nuzzled her happily. Thats already even better. You added what he thought, because he's happy, you added his surroundings when you said, 'lush valley' and you added what he was doing, because he was trotting to her, and nuzzling her.
Feel free to post here if this hasn't helped you. :]
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